Thursday, January 28, 2010

Just for Fun (not for grading)


Just to Tell

I have put on
the socks
that were left in
the blackshoe

and which
you were probably saving
for special occasion

forgive me
they are new
so comfortable
and so warm

2 comments:

  1. note: "new" - not new to the owner, but new to the person who puts on the socks for the first time.

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  2. I like how you used a picture to emphasize your parody. The picture truly creates the image that you are conveying in your parody. It is a bit vague on why the new socks are in a blackshoe, but then again, the plums being in an icebox could be considered random too. You used Williams' structure and used some of his words and used his tone.

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